We had a writing marathon last week during the Summer Institute. Before we all went our separate ways, Lois—who had recently returned from a train trip—asked us to imagine we see, hear, and smell a train. We were supposed to be travelers, but I couldn’t imagine that, so *I wrote this:
Chuga, chuga, chug
Choo choo, the train whizzes by
*Our writing during the institute isn't perfect; our point is to exercise. We see our activities as an opportunity to practice, and we feel successful whether the writing works well or not.
Chuga, chuga, chug
Choo choo, the train whizzes by
Leaving me behind.
*Our writing during the institute isn't perfect; our point is to exercise. We see our activities as an opportunity to practice, and we feel successful whether the writing works well or not.